Hey Marik, nice work! I love your lay out. One suggestion is larger base-line space in the body to make the text more readable.Cheers,Alex
Looking good...I agree with Alex, the body text could use a higher leading. Also, you may want to add a footer.
thank you for the advice alex and laurel. which of these 2 layout do you think look better?
the text looks better with less words and larger size. But i thinks it still needs larger leading. Open the lines up, Marik. Move your graphic a little bit and you have a lot of space. And like Laurel said earlier, you definitely need a footer :)
Hey Marik, nice work! I love your lay out. One suggestion is larger base-line space in the body to make the text more readable.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Alex
Looking good...I agree with Alex, the body text could use a higher leading. Also, you may want to add a footer.
ReplyDeletethank you for the advice alex and laurel. which of these 2 layout do you think look better?
ReplyDeletethe text looks better with less words and larger size. But i thinks it still needs larger leading. Open the lines up, Marik. Move your graphic a little bit and you have a lot of space. And like Laurel said earlier, you definitely need a footer :)
Delete